Thesis; With educational games such as "ID the Creep" and "Escape from your Boyfriends' Room" young girls and young men can sucessfully be taught how to identify, evaluate and defend themselves against adverse or abusive situations. [edit] By creating a situation of learning and 'saving' yourself, "Escape" is more effective in the combined purpose.
Outline for the paper will go something like this. I'm not sure yet how I'm going to go about doing this but...
Opening, Thesis
5- How they both work/or do not
4- How you win or lose
6- Purpose and explanation of effectiveness
7- Finally, something along the lines of
3- Game details
Conclusions
That is very vague, it is an outline but its something to go off of.
2 comments:
Your thesis is great but like you said you outline is very vague but i think that paper will be very interesting to read.
Your thesis sounds really great, but I think it might sound better if you remove the 'and' before the 'even young men...'. Your outline's really good too because at least it gives you and the reader a main idea of what your paper will be about.
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