Outline Re-do

Opening and Thesis
2-Explanation of both games, how to win/lose if possible
3-How does each game work for education?
4-How does each game persuade you to become more educated
5-Effectiveness
Conclusion



This one is more detailed, and should give a better idea
it's also more organized haha :)

Thesis and Outline

Thesis; With educational games such as "ID the Creep" and "Escape from your Boyfriends' Room" young girls and young men can sucessfully be taught how to identify, evaluate and defend themselves against adverse or abusive situations. [edit] By creating a situation of learning and 'saving' yourself, "Escape" is more effective in the combined purpose.

Outline for the paper will go something like this. I'm not sure yet how I'm going to go about doing this but...

Opening, Thesis
5- How they both work/or do not
4- How you win or lose
6- Purpose and explanation of effectiveness
7- Finally, something along the lines of
3- Game details
Conclusions

That is very vague, it is an outline but its something to go off of.